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Re: Prosthesis #51 /P
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May 10, 2007 -
Re: A Lost Carol: Introduction #1 /P
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Re: Prosthesis #50 /P
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Re: Prosthesis #49 /P
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Re: Prosthesis #48 /P
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Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: 1 sentence thriller
moosiegirl: Well, okay, so I have several questions (for instance...being the last person on earth doesn't exclude a noise from being made, does it?), but mostly: If you're the last ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Hush
Jane: Wonderful poetry, no doubt. The first sentence, though, I wonder if it is truly necessary, as the image it poses does not serve towards any end that I can ...
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #47 /P
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Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #46 /P
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Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #45 /P
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Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Arachnophobia
mandax-- Kill S4 and you will have a decent piece. The opening doesn't work exactly. It doesn't make sense, and you need to explain that somehow "There was an only ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: August Rain
ZanyPlebian -- Flowers and heartache? Give me a break. This would be greatly improved if you killed S1 and rephrased S2. Both, as they are, have terrible syntactic structure and ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Thy Interview
shmegan bob's back: Even if this were a serious attempt at literary allusion (for your sake, I'll assume it wasn't), it doesn't begin to meet the bare minimum for the ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: All Different Yet All The Same
Hello Fabien, This feels exhausted: the list of all the standards in all their standard descriptions serves to...what? "Lady Luck"--blatant in all the trappings of contrition--only deflates what was a
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: everything is not ok
best-kept-secret: My opinion is that this ineffective prose would be best-kept if you kept it to yourself. Toss this; lose the self-obsession. Best, Brad
Apr 26, 2007