Incandescence

Name: Alain Kojeve. Age: 24. Height: 6'1". Weight: 172. Eyes: Blue. Hair: Black. Physique: Sexy. Education: PhD in Psychoanalysis from University of Ljubljana. PhD in Philosophy from ENS. MA in ...

whence-- A vortex of this magnitude, with water inching up a shoreline miles and miles along, is quite rapid. What one really has, though, is not a vortex at all, ...

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Clau-- I don't think "emo" is a valid class of poetry. Best, Brad

All: I can't really follow the logic of the bill. As Nate says, it's timid, but it also opens up this whole can of worms about "tolerance" and, I fear, ...

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Imelda-- The level of detail is yours for the choosing. As a rule, I try to steer people away from anything that becomes cumbersome, since all I ever post here ...

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lequack / KKP-doppleganger - This jumps from one idea to another without connective tendrils. In the first strophe and second strophe, the majority of the action seems to take place ...

Staring_at_ceiling: You lump one cliche to another to form a poem that is both too-long and too-boring for anyone's attention-span. S2, S6 and S8 could be cut entirely without losing ...

Isis: During the course of revision, when you rewrite it to remove the abstractions and cliches (almost all of S2 and S4 are contrived narrative about flight and death) which ...