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whence-- I am inclined to like this, since I like flights of fancy. That said, this didn't effectively pull it off, and I think the discordance in S2 is evident ...

Twinflower-- This is an undistinguished list that tries unsuccessfully to be profound at the close. A weak concept balanced by weak execution. Throw this away. Try something else. All the ...

Ofour-- I can appreciate what you're trying to accomplish with this, but you aren't accomplishing it. My suggestion for future considerations is to focus more heavily your attention on sonics ...

something euclidean-- I got to the end of S2 and almost passed out from modifier overload. To my ear, S1 alone is a stronger poem than the three stophes you ...

Hi. There is nothing in this short set of airy musings that will interest any experienced reader of poetry. For example, the first few lines of the poem are logically ...

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Folks, folks... I don't care about God, so let's get back on topic... I think there's a very fine distinction to be made here: there is the biological imperative of ...

Jon slipped past another moving body. Music bled from the floor-to-ceiling speakers and drenched everything in the club with a deafening pulse. He squinted in the dark light as he ...

It was traumatizing. I had to eat a lost, wandering n00b for sustenance in the interim.

Kylan, I left this piece asking myself, "And...?" You have rehashed in boring language the narrative of cybernetic misanthropy, but to what purpose? Next time, ask yourself, "What new am ...

Sabine-- Perhaps as an MC workshop activity, this is fine, but as a poem, it suffers all the trappings indicative of beginner's work--useless repetition of overwrought phrases (endemic of writers ...

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