Incandescence

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Common Sense -- What, exactly, is "unconstitutional warfare"? To wit, the Constitution divides war into the two bodies: Congress, who is to declare war, and the President, who is to ...

Amelia-- Thanks for reading more of this drivel! =] In "book form" (as opposed to "post form"), the first part is more a glimpse of the future, not something immediately ...

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Young writers - For the past few weeks there has been intense, yet isolated, sparring on the appropriate approach to being a good critic: what it means, what is expected, ...

Young writers - For the past few weeks there has been intense, yet isolated, sparring on the appropriate approach to being a good critic: what it means, what is expected, ...

GingerLizzy, The preachy, second-person narrative is like a shot of strychnine. It derails not only the atmosphere that could have been set up, but also the theme of the poem ...

Mad-- Here's a line by line. Thousands of faces and millions of hands, -Hyperbole doesn't do much for poetry; in general, it makes whatever narrative there is less than genuine, ...

As an aside, Darwin's "The Origin of Species" was almost exclusively non-hominid, instead focusing on plants, turtles (he loved turtles), and, to a degree, chimpanzees. It wasn't until much later ...

Jasmine Hart, There might be a salvageable idea here if you clear up the debris of a poor execution. What I can make out is a decently worded bland story ...

Staring_at_ceiling, This is one cliche after another. I'm almost positive every image you used here has also been used in a Justin Timberlake song at one point or another. Rise ...

mariahneu, Each revision you have produced has shown no dramatic increase in dexterity nor in skill of reconstruction. Advice: set this aside. Forget you wrote it, and start reading the ...

logosgale-- Yale has an excellent creative writing department headed by some of the most brilliant fiction writers of our times. The University of Houston is also in the top five ...