Incandescence

This could be a great poem. Your redundancy of certain words like "chains" and "bruises" was minimally impacting, though, and sometimes there is more to tell us than what's on ...

I'm not a fan of the last line. Seemed to trite a saying. I understand what it's saying, I think you could reword it and give the sense of being ...

Brian You're an extent. Economically, Iraq is worse, but improving; socially, Iraq is better. And why wouldn't it be? What war has anyone come out of or gone into or ...

Galatea My apologies, and yes, our troops desserve better. However, claiming the War in Iraq an "unjustified" one, is little more than absurd. It is now known that through Al ...

Right. It has to do with the morons who run it.

For some clarification... God is an almighty being. He is the alpha (and the omega, but since we've no end, yet, this has no evidence). He cannot be created, because ...

This is good, to an extent. The conversion from "yes" to "no" was not as good as it could be. It seemed to lack something vital to the flow of ...

Blegh. This was absolutely horrific. Don't be preachy with your poetry. I get enough "Regret: The Anti-Drug" everytime I turn on the radio or watch the TV. This should have ...

You made the all too common mistake of interjecting noise when there is a really a pulsing silence already there.

Ingenius for a political poem. Some of the repetition proved virtuouso, but some repetition terribly fell through the cracks. The poem I liked--your beliefs I do not. Nevertheless, this was ...

This is weakly and sloppily construed. As a politically engaged piece, it was terrible. However, having slapped you in the face, I commend you for believing in something strong enough ...

curd

hm...the worst opening line: "Want to go to the S&M Family outlet?" Sadi asked the helpless little boy. S&M Family Outlet is a big clothing store here in Texas.

I'm a deist. Aethiesm is flawed because it states there is no God. Yet, as we delve deeper and deeper into science, and "everything is made up of something," we ...

GiQuai Brian's absolutely right, you know. Intolerance is a lack of understanding or lack of acceptance of an opposing viewpoint. You have as much intolerance in your veins as I ...