Incandescence

Western. but that's because i'm lazy. and i don't like standing. and i'm lazy. so yeah.

Brian, I commend and thank you for that post, this saves me a lot of space. As I view all major religions: they all had prophets who claimed they could ...

Global warming falls somewhere in between fantasy and hypothesis. Nobody does know for sure, and the reasons frequently cited for its occurences are easily refuted. We endured an Ice Age ...

I'm not a fan of this--at all. There are no images here. I do, however, like the bit after the line break.

The visual effect of the poem is not at its maximum potential. Example: Than simply fade Away Would most likely have the impact of fading away if it looked more ...

Absolutely brilliant. On the cusp of stunning that only a Salinger could create. Your tone in this poem is that of a trance and the feeling of being someone your ...

That was weird. But yeah, you know my feelings and get the general gist of what I believe. If you find me intolerant, sorry, I can't help the way I ...

That is not true. If I really love someone, I want to be able to say that I belong to them, and them to me. I didn't even know there ...

Congratulations, dude! That rocks. I can see why you got it.

Brie and sorry, the first one was my word and the rest were me being a loser. see, i told you i'm stupid.

Abstraction is somewhat important in poetry. This seemed to lack most of what I would consider to be "abstraction." Other than the entire metaphor which encapsulated the poem, you lacked ...

Considering the definition of an all-powerful God, then I would say it's a technical impossibility but a logical possibility. An all-powerful God cannot make something more powerful than all-powerful;

IM me later...but yeah, if I knew more about what the poem's aim was, I'd give better advice. At present, it appears to be a soft obviousness you point out ...

:ogles in deep admiration:

load lead bead brad! (heh, i'm stupid)