Incandescence

I dislike aethiesm, and find many of its points to be invalid and false. I don't disrespect or lack respect for aethiests, and I don't expect them to disrespect me. ...

Perhaps, but you forget that in a murder trial all evidence is circumstancial. An eye witness is circumstancial, even. The fact was, he didn't have any emotion about it, no ...

I could just as easily Googled what you showed me. Like Crysi said, you need to post your scripts here, not reference us off to some other site. I personally ...

Ahahahahahahahah :falls off chair: ahahahahahahahaha. Ouch. I really need to stop doing that.

As much as I agree with Brian, I have to disagree on one thing, or kind of. Censorship on television, I agree, is bad, in large part. There are, of ...

This may seem ironic, if one is to look at my criticisms, but I don't want to post on this for the simple reason that I know somebody'll get their ...

You had great rhythm first stanza; however, your second stanza leaves much to be desired. I'm not sure if I've said this before, but get away from death and suicidal ...

Kid (and I use the term even though you're older than me), this is a heck of a lot better than I could do. I guess I never really sat ...

I'm going to almost have to agree with the rest of the people. I was moved by this poem--its feel and rhythm was great. On a look back, the syntax ...

Perhaps I've listened to too much Switchfoot, but blowing up into a million pieces wasn't all that original. I think you would more likely disintegrate than anything. :shrugs: I like ...

Paris Hilton...well, I didn't watch her video or anything, but I really dislike how she used it to pump her and her tv shows up. It was stupid, and I ...

I prefer Coke way over Pepsi. However, I like Dr. Pepper, which supposedly is not common in the north, over both of them.

Oh, don't get me wrong, this is a by far better poem than your recent additions. Things I would lump in with the movie about Lemony Snicket's books. This was ...

The ending was crappy. I liked the poem, especially whenever it came off as a monologue, but after reading some of your other work, I think this is not quite ...

The repetition of Blue created nothing but an annoyance in this poem. It should have been a lot better than it was. The word "assaults" was awkward and "different" was ...