Incandescence

Whether or not you understood what I said the first post or not is totally irrelevant. Instead of critquing the way you understood what I said, you should be focusing ...

Aah. I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this. Although, I'm not feeling myself today, so that could be another factor. I liked the way you epitomized your relationship in a ...

Well, you certainly have a grasp on rhyme schemes, and there's nothing awkward about the poem. I enjoyed this, but like you said, I didn't retain any great impact on ...

Well, it doesn't say they have to be subservient, it says they have to obey their husbands. Likewise, husbands are supposed to respect their wives wants and desires "till death ...

My post was fine. There's nothing wrong with the theory that people emulate what's popular to achieve popularity or stardom, whatever you want to call it. You're in the wrong, ...

"I watched her hit you without swinging, It was so powerful I saw it in your face." Nice opening line, but the second line needs some definite revisions. Don't use ...

So, QiGuai, youth imitate/emulate these people because it is cool, all-powerful, whatever term you want to use, the fact is, they're in the limelight and we're not. Being cool and ...

Sadly, the Black community's elite have done next to nothing to improve the social view for most people, and an increasing number of Blacks are beginning to realize it. Most ...

Nothing but misconstrued directions we struggle to keep hold the fantasisies of insecure individuals wishing for lifes of gold "But dreams are what drives us," they say with buoyancy those ...

:falls of chair laughing: You..you included Barry White. :smiles: I love Barry White. Then it's the Beatles, well, some of their music, anyway. I hate Greenday, Linkin Park, Avril Lavigne, ...

legs

Death causes grief like snow covers a mountain is nonsensical. As I've said before, stop telling us about what an event does, but how it makes you feel. We're people, ...

This is stupid. I can't even begin to give you a criticism because all you do is state the obvious in every single one of your poems (except the most ...

I can relate. I don't think anyone can really give critiques of a haiku, though. They're too short for emotion and before you've said all that's needed to be said, ...

Well, Bubble, you've now become my favorite writer on here. This poem is not as powerful as it led me to believe. I think the ending should be tinkered with ...