Incandescence

i got a 48.

This is not in line with what I consider good poetry. It's too abstract for my own tastes, and I think you'll find that abstraction does not create good feedback, ...

The reality of the matter is this: unless the doctor is a sadomasochist, he won't help a patient commit suicide. The legal liability of such an act, and the legal ...

Wow. This was more cliche than I even imagined. You took some words and arranged them so they were not in a normal order, but when you decompose it down, ...

Well, here comes Mr. Cynical. This poem was stupid. Fast-paced? Yes. Moving? Yes. Gripping? Yes. Purposeful? Not by any means. It doesn't chill me like the ending tells me it ...

I somehow feel a sense of gratification in knowing that I've spawned some kind of mimicking. Probably not a good thing, though, for you. You have to find what expresses ...

This was soppy and not to my liking--at all. Understand, it was well written, for the most part (but we'll talk about that in a minute), but what really got ...

Heh. Know that I do.

As per your request, I erased the poem and moved the topic.

I'm (duh) conservative, but the Republican party is not the party that I would have admired 20 years ago.

Point in case: assisted suicide is not an option because there is always the possibility of a cure or a "miracle" (much as I detest the word). I spoke with ...

Tara and I are both schizo! might be bad to have some characteristics in common with me, though. Take it as a backhanded compliment, I s'pose.

...eh? The Beauty Myth? Perhaps... I don't shave/wax or use any cosmetics. Although...it's not like I have anything to *shave* anyway. Except maybe sideburns...

This was excellent in description. However, it seemed to fall to the bitter clutches of cliche at times. For example: "And it's when my heart was carved in two by ...

Well, this has a nice effect and reads easily, but it doesn't have a point. Like someone said, it'd be nice to hear this whispered, if you weren't paying attention ...