Incandescence

Caira [ahahahahaha] Coldplay [their lyrics are beautiful] Eve 6 [some of their stuff sucks] Exies, The [they're okay...i haven't listen to the entire cd though] Killers, The [like their songs ...

Not to be sardonic, but this poem is overdone. I didn't see Wulie's voice come through in it at all. Instead, I heard the voice of kids from 11 to ...

Ack! Steer away from poems about suicide, or may God help you. Because you are a new writer, I am not going to say too much, because I've nothing to ...

Wulie is becoming an absolutely marvelous writer and gives excellent and in-depth critiques on others' works.

I have mixed emotions about this poem. I liked certain lines, and others just kind of dissipate into nothingness. You seem to have a good understanding of poetry, and are ...

I am afraid of being eaten. I guess by cannibals or something.

This is unimpressive. I've come to expect more from you. Some of your lines (i.e. "cold empty heart") dissolve into cold empty triteness. Of course, it could be a sense ...

Take this as you will, but this reflected, and did so quite well, the fact that you are 13.

Bobo has really strong convictions and stands by them.

Get over your d*** imagery. Beautiful poetry isn't comprised of only beautiful images. This would be a lot better if you focused the point of it and dropped the goofy ...

Family Guy exudes randomness. which is why i like it.

I would say wait until you actually break in to the career before you tattoo your body. While I'm typically against it, I can't persuade you not to get them. ...

This is a sad attempt at making fun of Christianity. If taking potshots at the validity of Mary being a virgin makes you swell with some sort of gross pride ...

This was utterly pointless. Whatever meaning it has for you, it has for you only. Your readers will pull nothing from it, and the flow of the poem is disjointed ...

This was on TYWC. I still don't like it.