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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: No Words Can Describe

    Pointless, really.

    Mar 6, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: NO RIP TYWC

    Not really; I don't know. It's what first inspired me to continue writing, despite the long wait my poems had to endure to be posted. Still, I think it's bad ...

    Mar 6, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: If You Had Any Superpower....

    Hmm...how about the ability to become forms and objects containing H20? Oh wait...darn, that's the Wonder Twins. Uhm...I think I would want the ability to seduce staplers.

    Mar 6, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: In Need of an Editor

    The amount of the story I post will vary with the responses I get from the editors already in place. While the first few chapters are completely readable by any ...

    Mar 6, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: In Need of an Editor

    Yeah, after that, it tends to get...heavy.

    Mar 5, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: In Need of an Editor

    Okay, guys, I'm writing a novella for my ENGL 4330 class. It's entitled, Nat, or Naught: A Family History and is not intended for persons under the age of, say, ...

    Mar 5, 2005
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: .

    There are many secrets in this story. When you say "Hugh" it almost sounds the same as "you." The point of saying "Hugh were" is to clue the reader into ...

    Mar 5, 2005
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)

    Nah, I don't mind vulgarity and profanity in poetry (look at my poetry and my stories). But there is a proper way that can add to the poem, and there ...

    Mar 5, 2005
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)

    The profanity made this poem ten times worse than it really is.

    Mar 5, 2005
  • Writing Activities Re: One line Summary

    "No! Please don't abdust me!" (I couldn't resist) If you had a 52 year old stalker, what would you say to them?

    Mar 4, 2005
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: .

    Gracias. As I explained to Misty, "Hugh were" and then switching it to "you" and "your" in the end is a homonym/annagramatical trick. If read aloud, "Hugh" almost sounds like ...

    Mar 4, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: A perfect goverment

    Hence it was said that it only works in small communities.

    Mar 4, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: attempt at universality (you may now laugh)

    It also reflects how much better I write when I'm sober or not high.

    Mar 4, 2005
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: .

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    Mar 4, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: A perfect goverment

    True democracy doesn't mean 100% of the people agree. It means 100% of the people vote. The majority still wins. Dont' confuse true democracy with perfect harmony.

    Mar 4, 2005


The emperor is rich, but he can't buy another day.
— Chinese Proverb