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  • Lounge, The Re: If...

    1. If you were to be granted one wish, what would it be? Successful repression of innocents. 2. If you could physically transport yourself to any place in the world ...

    Mar 13, 2005
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Finally, the Syllabus for my Honors Freshman English Course

    Just a taste of what kind of professor I am. Heeeeee. =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= Syllabus Honors Freshman English I ENGL 1360 Class: 5:30-8:00pm F Instructor: Brad Stanley Dorm telephone: 8

    Mar 13, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Some Personal Aphorisms

    My General Guidelines 1. Let others be right, it consoles them for being nothing else. 2. The tedious regularity of life isn't completely worthless. 3. A useful phrase in many ...

    Mar 13, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: inactivity is a sin

    I'm sorry. This poem did nothing for me. I'll comment seriously later, though. We moved three gondolas and a 8 or 9 filing cabinets today. So yeah...I'll come back tomorrow ...

    Mar 13, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: compensated beauty

    A romanticized piece. But you pulled it off well, not sounding to cheesy or moonstruck. I liked this poem, but then again, I'm a fan of compensated dating (in theory, ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: ten years (very...pathetic...I CAN'T WRITE ANYMORE!!!)

    This: darkness also known as the past. Would be fine as: darkness also known as the past I think "lame" is a very good word for this poem, although you're ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadow Walkers

    Well, everyone seems to enjoy it. So let me break this moment of reminiscent praise and say that it was "okay." I didn't understand the point you were trying to ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Feel One's Pain; To Feel One's Joy

    Try to evade words that end in "ness." Such as "deadness," which has got to be the stupidest word I have ever heard. This poem was not very...mmm...emotionally or logically ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Black Rose

    And it shall be christened: A Schizophrenic Look at Gothicism.

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Sea of Night

    "After all these years"? You're...14, you know? Unless you suffer from the Oedipus Complex, I think you romanticized the poem and metastasized it into something putridly manic. At any rate... ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Worser Things

    Worser things than falling to bits At the slightest pressure :smiles:

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: the former master/piece

    This poem wallowed in mediocricity. The first stanza makes you sound like some manic depressive who lusts after Hillary Duff or Avril Lavigne or something. The end of the second ...

    Mar 11, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: profound

    Or perhaps for nothing at all.

    Mar 10, 2005
  • Writing Tips Re: How do YOU get last names for a story charater?

    My last names either A) are annagrams, B) have etymological roots that correlate to the character's traits, or C) combine two words to describe the character. My last names are ...

    Mar 10, 2005
  • Romantic Novels Re: Nat, or Naught: A Family History: Part I: Chapters I & I

    Removed.

    Mar 10, 2005


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind