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Re: If...
1. If you were to be granted one wish, what would it be? Successful repression of innocents. 2. If you could physically transport yourself to any place in the world ...
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Re: Finally, the Syllabus for my Honors Freshman English Course
Just a taste of what kind of professor I am. Heeeeee. =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= Syllabus Honors Freshman English I ENGL 1360 Class: 5:30-8:00pm F Instructor: Brad Stanley Dorm telephone: 8
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Re: Some Personal Aphorisms
My General Guidelines 1. Let others be right, it consoles them for being nothing else. 2. The tedious regularity of life isn't completely worthless. 3. A useful phrase in many ...
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: inactivity is a sin
I'm sorry. This poem did nothing for me. I'll comment seriously later, though. We moved three gondolas and a 8 or 9 filing cabinets today. So yeah...I'll come back tomorrow ...
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: compensated beauty
A romanticized piece. But you pulled it off well, not sounding to cheesy or moonstruck. I liked this poem, but then again, I'm a fan of compensated dating (in theory, ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: ten years (very...pathetic...I CAN'T WRITE ANYMORE!!!)
This: darkness also known as the past. Would be fine as: darkness also known as the past I think "lame" is a very good word for this poem, although you're ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Shadow Walkers
Well, everyone seems to enjoy it. So let me break this moment of reminiscent praise and say that it was "okay." I didn't understand the point you were trying to ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: To Feel One's Pain; To Feel One's Joy
Try to evade words that end in "ness." Such as "deadness," which has got to be the stupidest word I have ever heard. This poem was not very...mmm...emotionally or logically ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: The Black Rose
And it shall be christened: A Schizophrenic Look at Gothicism.
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: The Sea of Night
"After all these years"? You're...14, you know? Unless you suffer from the Oedipus Complex, I think you romanticized the poem and metastasized it into something putridly manic. At any rate... ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Worser Things
Worser things than falling to bits At the slightest pressure :smiles:
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: the former master/piece
This poem wallowed in mediocricity. The first stanza makes you sound like some manic depressive who lusts after Hillary Duff or Avril Lavigne or something. The end of the second ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: profound
Or perhaps for nothing at all.
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: How do YOU get last names for a story charater?
My last names either A) are annagrams, B) have etymological roots that correlate to the character's traits, or C) combine two words to describe the character. My last names are ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Nat, or Naught: A Family History: Part I: Chapters I & I
Removed.
Mar 10, 2005
