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  • Writing Activities Re: One line Summary

    What I do now: keep writing it and laugh at those immature enough to be offended. If you could bathe in any substance, what would it be?

    Mar 18, 2005
  • Writing Activities Re: One line Summary

    :eyes narrow: "What are *you* staring at?" If a package were to show up at your door (Assuming, of course, this package can be any size), and you could make ...

    Mar 18, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: call us the sun

    This is a good idea to incorporate into poetry, but I think you could perhaps aim it away from literally telling us this revelatory information, and guide it more in ...

    Mar 18, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Memorising Poems

    Doesn't make much sense. The last line should be swapped with the third one, for a coherent thought to be made. I would also replace the "all" with "their" solely ...

    Mar 18, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Plato SUCKS

    Because he was, in a sense, the first modern philosopher. Although...I would consider Heraclitas or Socrates the Father of Philosophy, but Plato was the first to write a Book over ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?

    Midnight, that isn't manslaughter. If you get mad and decide to beat someone to death with a saucepan, you planned to kill them. Just because you didn't spend weeks stalking ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?

    And that is all that is convicted. Also, when one does not plan on killing someone, it's called Manslaugter, not murder.

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?

    That logic is flawed. Frankly, the world has been blind for quite some time. The second point is that not everyone will murder someone. Part of understanding "an eye for ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?

    While such a debate may slink into the realm of Religion, Capital Punishment does not have to. Justice is defined as "fairness" or "equity." When we put what a murderer ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Just begun

    The first stanza was very jittery, almost schizophrenic. The idea of one line did not flow into that of the next. The stanzas following were very literal, which made them ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Epistemology

    You seem to have opened a College Introductory Philosophy textbook and randomally placed lines from it and called it a "poem." No. This is not a poem, and I refuse ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Vacuum

    This is a pseudo-intellectual piece of garbage. Your point was weakly construed and wrong. "People will not necessarily be transient." The sad truth is: we are. "The rumour that they ...

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Life is a load of Free Stuff

    You stole this from Senor_Saurkraut at TYWC/Scissorquiz on YWS. Please don't plagiarize, it diminishes everyone. Here's the original:

    Mar 17, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Plato SUCKS

    Plato is, hopefully, burning in hell. The Allegory of the Cave is retarded, and besides, anyone who offers you an allegory should be feared and avoided at ALL costs.

    Mar 16, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Post your pic on thread 2

    Hahaha. Hawk, yeah, the whole singular Ab thing was intended to make fun of me for my lack of muscle. Haha, glad you noticed though.

    Mar 16, 2005


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