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Re: One line Summary
What I do now: keep writing it and laugh at those immature enough to be offended. If you could bathe in any substance, what would it be?
Mar 18, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
:eyes narrow: "What are *you* staring at?" If a package were to show up at your door (Assuming, of course, this package can be any size), and you could make ...
Mar 18, 2005 -
Re: call us the sun
This is a good idea to incorporate into poetry, but I think you could perhaps aim it away from literally telling us this revelatory information, and guide it more in ...
Mar 18, 2005 -
Re: Memorising Poems
Doesn't make much sense. The last line should be swapped with the third one, for a coherent thought to be made. I would also replace the "all" with "their" solely ...
Mar 18, 2005 -
Re: Plato SUCKS
Because he was, in a sense, the first modern philosopher. Although...I would consider Heraclitas or Socrates the Father of Philosophy, but Plato was the first to write a Book over ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?
Midnight, that isn't manslaughter. If you get mad and decide to beat someone to death with a saucepan, you planned to kill them. Just because you didn't spend weeks stalking ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?
And that is all that is convicted. Also, when one does not plan on killing someone, it's called Manslaugter, not murder.
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?
That logic is flawed. Frankly, the world has been blind for quite some time. The second point is that not everyone will murder someone. Part of understanding "an eye for ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty. Right Or Wrong?
While such a debate may slink into the realm of Religion, Capital Punishment does not have to. Justice is defined as "fairness" or "equity." When we put what a murderer ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: Just begun
The first stanza was very jittery, almost schizophrenic. The idea of one line did not flow into that of the next. The stanzas following were very literal, which made them ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: Epistemology
You seem to have opened a College Introductory Philosophy textbook and randomally placed lines from it and called it a "poem." No. This is not a poem, and I refuse ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: The Vacuum
This is a pseudo-intellectual piece of garbage. Your point was weakly construed and wrong. "People will not necessarily be transient." The sad truth is: we are. "The rumour that they ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: Life is a load of Free Stuff
You stole this from Senor_Saurkraut at TYWC/Scissorquiz on YWS. Please don't plagiarize, it diminishes everyone. Here's the original:
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: Plato SUCKS
Plato is, hopefully, burning in hell. The Allegory of the Cave is retarded, and besides, anyone who offers you an allegory should be feared and avoided at ALL costs.
Mar 16, 2005 -
Re: Post your pic on thread 2
Hahaha. Hawk, yeah, the whole singular Ab thing was intended to make fun of me for my lack of muscle. Haha, glad you noticed though.
Mar 16, 2005
