Incandescence

I don't necessarily feel they are wrong in pushing a separation of races. When people combine religion, language, heritage, etc. they become much easier to dominate and, therefore, much more ...

The Fall was meant to happen so God could actualize Himself as being. He otherwise existed in a realm of boundless potentialities. Carmina: I was explaing to Pricelesslove the effects ...

If I may...we got where we are because for the past 1700 years people have lived by the Bible. They have made their own interpretation of it (starting around 1600 ...

Just because religion says we are not separate is meaningless. The very ideal of religion, found only in the human species, however, negates this belief.

Another interesting thing: the Bible states that God condemns all sins the same. Nobody is perfect - so homosexual acts, it would seem, are merely an extension of "bad" things ...

The nineteen hijackers who invaded America on September 11, 2001, couldn't have done it without help from the United States government. We unlocked our doors, spread out the welcome mat, ...

That's a myth about the American economy - that we need immigrants to sustain it. We don't need anything - there are not enough jobs to go around for American ...

ps. sorry, but I wanted to retain my indents, and since somebody forgot to leave us that option :eyes narrow: I put in Code. hee.

It wasn't actually a "bam" because the rest of the poem was not "bam." It has to be a recursive pattern, or a build-up, which made the ending much less ...

Again, lose the rhyme scheme. The reference at the end to Greek mythology was ill-chosen and ineffective, as well. If you want to make literary allusions in your poetry, it ...

Your metre is off in certain places. While I like the idea of love compared to poker, it didn't strike me as anything too profound in this. Mostly because you ...

It felt, to me, at least, that the person whom the poem was written about changed multiple times throughout the poem (i.e. poems begins with 'you' and ends with 'me'). ...

We would have an overflow of immigrants and subsequently not enough living arrangements, resulting in a depressed economy and a skyrocketing homeless population.

I'm not a fan. Sorry, but it had no point, although some good images. The second to last line is just...ew.

It isn't about my younger brother. It's about my older brother who committed suicide when I was 9.