Incandescence

Viagra doesn't endanger everyone, m'dear. If everyone took Viagra, not everyone would be blind. However, if everyone smoked pot, everyone's brains would deteriorate at a higher rate than usual.

I don't have a critique -- there's nothing there worth critiquing. Some poets make the mistake of opening up too large an issue, others focus on microcosmic spectacles. You achieved ...

Jack, First Stanza: This is chopped up, mediocre prose with just about every beginner's mistake in the book - a feeble attempt to draw a grand moral from a weak ...

Removed.

Some small crits: Ghostly hands caress your face Okay... Loving you isn't enough anymore Very unconnected to the first line. Also, you need to answer what is enough, now? Miles ...

His hand...

Luke, I am your father.

Overdone.

As Nate said earlier, having random, nothing-to-do-at-all-with-the-subject-or-the-target-audience names are popular these days. Besides, goats are awesome! And since we run writing-oriented sites on p

Your point is? It was banned because it was proven to directly endanger the lives of those taking it.

Uhm, if they're being used on patients, then they're legal...

There's a thing called the Social Contract, which means that Congress shall pass no law that directly endangers the lives of the people.

Since when did science care about morals?

I, too, never had a furby. I wanted one, but the parents were wiser. So I played with my uncle's once. That's rather disturbing...

Clinical depression and physical/mental trauma are easily related. Saying they aren't is like saying anaclitic love is not, in some way, related to narcissistic love. Just because we don't understand ...