Incandescence

Sab/Bobo/whomever: There are several advantages, not the least of which is that being seemingly gay makes you somewhat more attractive to women. I know, having lived through this. There are ...

Blah blah blah, prima-donna pacifism is just as bad as all-out agression. Bush, right now, desserves his ratings: the War in Iraq is over, been over, and it's (been) time ...

^ (lol, thanks) Doesn't realize how difficult typing is when someone is pulling on one of your arms.

^is a godess [supposedly]

FOR: Jack I'm both drawn to and repelled by this piece. The language is intoxicating, but the point is nauseating, and I found myself falling to sleep in mid-sentence. You've ...

Oh, I haven't posted on here in a while, but for obvious reasons, I suppose. Hm. Well, I've let my hair grow out some. Now, it's almost six inches. See ...

As a comment, using the word 'fuck' in every poem obviously degenerates its effect, but otherwise, I found this, as a piece of humor, quite likeable.

So? ... What do you want me , the reader, to do? Hate him? Have pity for him? Because I don't -- your words were not descriptive enough, which, I ...

^ feels trapped in a pattern. Of course, there's quite the difference between recognizing a pattern and getting rid of it.

No, there hasn't. You can ask any Constitutional Law professor, and they will tell you the only way to change a law is to break it. Peaceful protests are what ...

Sorry Cal, but this isn't happenin'. Esoteric images, each faintly connected, does not constitute the measure of a poem. You have some ideas here that I've seen in your other ...

The only way to change the law is to break it.

The term gained its popularity through the American Revolution.

Your too loose with your language; something to be expected of longer poems, but, nevertheless, something to still guard against. So trim the poem up and get more precise; also, ...

FOR: xanthan gum First, I'm glad you liked it; second, I'm not surprised the point wasn't conveyed in a very clear, precise manner. Something I'm beginning to take notice of ...