Incandescence

I don't think I've critted your work before. I like the topic of this poem, and the way you get right into it in S1, which I think is quite ...

Try using this new thing out (it's totally awesome): we call it a "period," but if you want an even better deal, we've got you a package called "Grammatical Structure."

Aren't "those periods" called ellipsis?

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I would suggest Kafka's "Metamorphosis," since that type of "physical journey" begins to take you in a slightly different path. Instead of simply the-body-in-motion, you have motion-in-the-body. A nic

I don't know what a Psychical Journey is.

For those of you who don't know, Ted Bundy was a serial killer. He would go from college campus to college campus brutally raping/torturing and killing college girls. His last ...

If by "English" you mean, "Critical Theory and Criticism," then, yes, I like it. If by "Math" you mean, "Partial Differential Equations" and "Complex Analysis," then, yes, I like it. ...

No. I presume what Nate is saying is that certain forums will have certain currencies that you have to use to post there (and/or get from posting there). The only ...

Pretty, but I didn't see anything to get from the poem. There's nothing really memorable here. I'm going submit this, and tomorrow, I won't even remember what I read.

Every poet needs reaffirmation, sometimes. :)

The future never exists. "I'll do it tomorrow" is a lie. Tomorrow never comes. You can't appreciate a better future because of a good today. The rich man, assuming he ...

Why not something magical like "quills" or something? :)

The "dark angel" was a reference to Thomas Wolfe...

Jack, I keep coming back to this, trying to find a nice way to salvage it. Maybe some of the following suggestions will aid you in future development of this ...