Incandescence

khfan890, It's just as logical as there existing a sun, or any other part of the cosmos. ink_on_fire, (Uranus spins on its side, not backwards.) The universe is about 14 ...

Aedomir, Look. Don't people die from life in prison? And then what would the purpose of their prison sentence be, because they will "not know they existed, nor that they ...

Rubric, What if a murderer who was to be “capitally punished” kills a would-be serial killer who was imprisoned for a relatively minor offence? Because in the US we have ...

Aedomir, There are so many things wrong with your argument I don't know where to begin. I'll just make a few in-line comments. Since when has death been a form ...

Aedomir, Do you also consider it hypocritical and ironic for police to take money back at gunpoint from a man who robbed a bank at gunpoint? What about a woman ...

ink_on_fire, The opening two lines, as well as several others throughout, seem too forcibly "poetic" to my ear. "Toxicity" connotes a level of poison, a leak in the defenses, that ...

soconfused4512, The numerous spelling mistakes coupled with a close of "THE END!!!!!" is the fingerprint of doggerel. The poem's tragic flaw is that it's topic--the N/mother dynamic--never gets off th

Shafter, The mechanics of the poem are relatively fine. The rhyme scheme sometimes comes off as a scheme instead of a natural flowing, but I found nothing particular to comment ...

3-Damentional, This is junk - a clumsy pastiche of lines that leads nowhere slowly, and which is framed in language sometimes not even your own (lyrics from songs that were ...

Talking_Pinata, The first lines are the only thing remotely interesting in the piece. S2 offers a reference to "something" sinister in the sky--what is it? Whatever it is, it apparently ...

ChildofEden, What is the reader supposed to take away from the piece? Am I supposed to be moved, to empathize with the plight of the narrator, to enjoy it purely ...

Because I wanted to..., The gender-swapping pronouns seem random and undefined in S1 and S2, and while I get a pretty good idea of what's going on, I think you ...

oneeyedunicornhunter, First, who is the intended audience for this? I got no clear sense of who you are writing this for from the language itself--it seems mostly like a personal ...

The problem of suing for libel is that you have to somehow prove that at the time of the posting, the poster knew the information to be false. You also ...

Commando, Let me observe, as a general rule, that it's often in bad taste to post a response to users in which you allegedly want their "serious" comments riddled with ...