Incandescence

Hi RoseEmma, I hope you find YWS a helpful community. As for this: is it all in the voice? There are a number of false starts here, but nothing that ...

Hey Brian, Long time no see. Good to hear from you again. I suspect most people aren't commenting on this because most aren't reading it because, as you said, it's ...

For xanthan: Remnants of Auschwitz writers? I wonder. Some in-line suggestions: Tinder and ash. On top of shoes, it ["it"? Ash? Clarify, please] slides (and whisks off) into (the )corridor-darkness. ...

Hi xanthan, Enjoyable. This builds to quite a climax. I wonder if L8 and L9 are really working for their living or secretly working on their own agendas, flirting with ...

Dearest Raven, Welcome! I hope you find YWS hospitable and, further, beneficial to your personal musings and maturity. As for the poem, I am left wondering: What is going on ...

LamaLama, Have you ever looked at international tests? You will quickly see they are quite comprehensive. Obviously, "teaching to the test" does not mean, strictly, you only teach what is ...

In recent years, we've heard again and again the cries from our so-called highschool "educators" that "teaching to the test" is, well, detestable. Most of these staunch opponents laud "discovery-based

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Hey Miss Murder, Can I offer up a critique? Enjoy some inline comments with hot chocolate: Let me (try to) understand [:] There’s (this ) [a] feeling in my hand ...

Hey bob, Surely this piece should be a great success here for the rose garden soppy love devotees legion. Among us urban dwellers, however, this is in need of repair. ...

Dear xanthan, I hope you appreciate some in-line commentary. Apple grinds are not filtered out(,) [;] ( and) [they] cling to (the insides of your )capillary walls [inside you] , ...

Hi yoha, I find this very long as it is trying to find something worth saying. In that sense it is far, far too short. There might be something in ...

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Thanks for catching those spelling glitches. When I have an idea, grammar and spelling go out the window. =] As for the "thrilled, terrified, thrilled" bit -- I understand the ...

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