Incandescence

Slickjimmy, Recursive comments should lead you to assume you have not improved. Best, Brad

Hi timjim77, I am glad to see you around again. The same can not be said for this piece. It seems to me an excuse for a string of Poetickal ...

SlickJimmy, "Is it poetry?" That was the question asked when Whitman published his Leaves of Grass . Many of the poems written by Fernando Pessoa would seem prose if one ...

I think I am a different writer--as I well should be. I am a different person than I was years ago. The question of improvement, however, can only yield strictly ...

Sponson Light, I did not say I looked down on people without religious beliefs. Please contain your comments to the content. Obviously, as you said, you don't have to say ...

Teeeeo, While you have the right not to say the pledge, I generally find those without religious objections to be short-sighted. Reciting the "pledge of allegiance" simply means you will ...

Lexy, Welcome to the Young Writers Society. I think you will find many helpful and insightful people here to aid you in the creation and development of ideas. You can ...

Thanks Bob! I just needed to make sure all the symbols were there.

Hi guys, This is just a test message. I am interested in seeing how many of you can open the attached document. It is the first page of my lecture ...

Everyone, My thanks for taking the time to read and respond. I was hoping the last line, being off-metered, would indicate a shift from the dog's belongings to the owner's. ...

Snoink, This was a pleasurable read. It was something I might expect to stumble upon in a Shel Silverstein book. No serious comments, since this does not beckon seriousness. Keep ...

Griffin, I suppose the only thing I have to offer is that heated exchange is only a sign of passion--nothing else. As long as people still believe in their passions, ...

Sgt. Pepper, I appreciate the sincerity of this approach. I am, however, left baffled and, almost, intrigued by the ideas. Still, there are spots where you have slipped into cliche ...

Hi Elizabeth, I will refrain from serious comments, since your poem refrained from serious questions. Give it some fat-trimming (there's quite a bit to chop off--watch that your blade doesn't ...

I have to agree with Sureal; sensitivity is a good quality, but as of late, it seems it is being taken to a bit of an extreme. Whatever the case, ...