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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Four-Leafed Clovers

    Cade, Consider: 1. re-titling this "Four-Leafed Clovers" 2. cutting S1 3. reworking the enjambment of S2, which at present is at odds with the whimsy of the poem; finding better ...

    Jun 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P

    3. is posted. As a note, 3 and 4 were originally going to be chapter 3. However, I think splitting them and leaving 3 as a clearly demarcated panorama (of ...

    Jun 15, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A hand takes yours

    Eimear, I've not commented much on your work—though you've made several swaths through mine—so I'll make a first step with this poem, which I realize is dated a bit. No ...

    Jun 12, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P

    Added #2.

    Jun 10, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques, Anyone?

    That should be the story.

    Jun 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P

    Removed.

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Major Evolution Flaw

    Thunder_dude7, There have been countless discussions here recently about the processes of evolution, supposed "flaws" of the theory, and so on. All have been given due discussion and argumentation, an

    Jun 3, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Is four really equal to two plus two?

    Depends what base you're in. ;)

    May 31, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Understand Me

    Juncboks No. This is a collection of tired platitudes about your heart, who are you, and so on. It's constructed with arbitrary short lines that are at odds with the ...

    May 29, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty

    Aedomir, Nobody is going to argue with you if your "points" are illogical (and they are, as Snoink thankfully pointed out). You need to consider her criticisms and revise your ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Recent supreme court decision re gay marriage, I'm confused.

    I believe legislative action is taken when there needs to be a law adjusted. The courts are left to interpret the laws the legislative (and executive, in some cases) branch ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Recent supreme court decision re gay marriage, I'm confused.

    Well, of course, Jack. :) That's why, in a rare move, they went against starre decisis and overturned their ban on that, too.

    May 22, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Why do some schools have better education than others?

    The reason American education has suffered so severely, as Nate pointed out a couple pages ago, is a multi-faceted problem that stems primarily, at least in my experience in math ...

    May 21, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Recent supreme court decision re gay marriage, I'm confused.

    Heidigirl666, It is now legal for gays to be married in California. Suzanne, Not exactly. What about slavery, when a majority of people felt it should remain? Judges—at a certain ...

    May 21, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Death Penalty

    Aedomir, If you would read her argument, she wasn't saying it cost more or less to kill someone. Her argument was that she didn't want her tax dollars supporting the ...

    May 17, 2008


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— Carl Sandburg