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Ciao! Allow me to star out with... A brother and sister stood out in their front yard. The leaves quivered at the wind’s mercy as winds blew. It passed through ...

Hey for writing your first poem you have a nice idea on what emotions you're trying to catch at. Now you just have to hone those emotions in- in order ...

obviously you arent following the normal pattern poem people seem to cherish. Awesome! Now as for the poem. When you start reading it you have a hard time following along ...

Quite frankly I liked your idea behind this poem; however, you might want to try writing it a different way. Saayyy perhaps: Always away from tomorrow but we're a step ...

First allow me to say I have not read your other chapters but seeing as I'm able to judge this with new eyes I hope it'll be a help for ...