Ina_in_boots

Hiya and welcome! Two rules you should know: 1- Review two works before posting any of your own. That way, everybody gets a review. Plus, people are much more willing ...

Ciao! Ooh Italy. The land of the Pizza. And also the Pisa. So where are you now? Oh yes, do tell us more about yourself! What kind of things are ...

Hey for writing your first poem you have a nice idea on what emotions you're trying to catch at. Now you just have to hone those emotions in- in order ...

obviously you arent following the normal pattern poem people seem to cherish. Awesome! Now as for the poem. When you start reading it you have a hard time following along ...

Quite frankly I liked your idea behind this poem; however, you might want to try writing it a different way. Saayyy perhaps: Always away from tomorrow but we're a step ...

Hideous the thought you came to be so low How once you entranced those around you with the slightest glow Yet now you fold yourself from the slightest glance Oh ...

First allow me to say I have not read your other chapters but seeing as I'm able to judge this with new eyes I hope it'll be a help for ...

I have to say my favorite picture is of the passing car. Everything in the photo seems a bit blurred or brushed out; however, the car is in focus. Cute ...

Hypnotic hands Sought forth from thine waste lands Let the blood seep from thine ears Heareth not the maggots lair Hidden beneath your elastic skin Color tinged with thine eyes ...

just a creep into the mind just a thought to process out the used waste of time while sitting in bed you experience it just a creep into the room ...

Ciao! Obviously I'm new to this society; however, I have joined because I am currently in the middle of writing a new novel. I'm having a devastating amount of writers ...