In_the_Moonlight

Wow this chapter was really intense. I just wish you would have made her say something to Keith before he well you know.........kicked the bucket.I can't wait to find out ...

I liked this poem a lot. The title somehow doesn't seem right, but it's your poem so.... On shame, for all The words whispered to The Forgotten Son. Sinners do ...

This was an okay poem. Part of it was really good while the other wasn't so good. I got confused somewhere in between, and then lost track. I also think ...

I've been trying to write my own book for a while now. Everytime I try to actually write about one topic, it totally flies out of my brain and a ...

I thought it was good......... :roll: .......I think it reminds you of the terrier by Tamora Pierce.... Who said that?? *looks around with innocent puppy face* not me.... :lol: *laughs ...

this was... AWESOME! :D

im confused is inuyasha still a show!!?? O and LOST SUCKED!!!!!!!!! :smt074

I LOVE INUYASHA!! I'm gonna sign the petition right now!

Awwww. I love the ending it made me feel like a whole new story was about to be written. I can't really explain it, but I loved it. I was ...

Gosh- I love this story so far. Thanx for private messaging me or I would have missed out on this great chapter. Although I loved it I have to critique ...

This was a really good chapter, you found a nice place in the story to talk more about the coven. It didn't feel random or anything. I also like how ...

Bravo. That was really good. This poem was intense in several different ways. I'll just explain some of them. Overall: -easy flow -creative -painted a story -wonderful word choice -awesome ...

Wow, I liked how you continued this chapter. It was very entertaining and made the story more suspenseful. I don't think you ruined the tone of the story, if anything ...

This poem is really entertaining. I like the topic idea about if art could speak. I laughed when you talked about how the person in the picture was smiling, but ...

This poem didn't completely suck like you say it does. I just think it needs a lot of work. Some of it rhymes while most of it doesn't. I thought ...