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Lucyy, I loved this chapter. What a great way to start off the story. Your writing has improved so much since I last read your prologue. Very well done. Right ...

Oh that was a burn.......geeze thats gotta hurt the ego. Anyway I thought the five lines you gave were fine. I'm gonna have to go with the first person that ...

Thanx for the reviews!!

YAY CABLE!

OMG!CLIFF-HANGER! I totally 100% loved the ending of this chapter. My new thing is that I pick a quote or something out of the passage so here it goes.... Good, ...

Bada ba ba ba I'm lovin it. This is a great chapter that just opened a door to so many other good ones. I love your work, and since I ...

Awww. This chapter is really sad, but I think it was necessary to make the other chapters.......better. There were the popular, blonde girls. The boasting, big jocks. The glasses-wearing, thin ...

No, the screen isn't weird on my computer. I liked this chapter. I felt something was missing from it, something really important. Maybe it was to fast. I think you ...

Hey Lucyy- Okay I'm just gonna go ahead and review your work and then tell you more. [quote] I was stood in front You did this twice. I think you ...

I know this really isn't the best, but it was the best I could do in 45 minutes. If anyone knows the story of Don Quixote, then you know that ...

Hey KJ I personally, liked this chapter. It was very informative, but in a more gracefull way- if that makes sense. The begining was great when you started with that ...

Hey KJ This chapter was different from your others. It was really slow and I didn't mind it at first, but towards the end it felt like you were giving ...