In_the_Moonlight

This was really great. I can't believe this is my first time reading your work. I couldn't pick up on any grammar or spelling errors. Gradually, the grey passed but ...

That was so adorable. I was laughing so hard when he talked about his adventure of the day. Vick really does seem like a good guy for Becca but then ...

This was a shorter chapter then usual. Good, but short. I was sort of expecting a little more action and got something totally different. The whole chapter was basically her ...

I'm in shock. I hope with a burning passion that Genny doesn't stay with Jeff. I don't know why but I think Mark is a better choice even if he ...

KJ- Wow. That. Was. AWESOME! This was beautifully written, like most of your work. The whole chapter I was feeling so much suspense and pressure it was killing me. Although ...

Holy Crud! I loved this! It's a bit cliche here and there but I'm a sucker for cliche love. Especially if it sound or relates to anything that has to ...

No,no. When I talked about the dumpster I meant it was right next to her. I should probably make that more clear. Thanks for the critique and I'll do my ...

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Oh. My. Gosh. That was such a good chapter; way to continue it. I loved how you smoothly slided the point of view from Rosaline to Rosetta, it made the ...

I really liked this chapter; it was informative and pleasing to the eye. Plus you didn't ridiculously big words that absolutely no one has any idea to what they could ...

Sorry Kj, I don't have time to review the chapter right now because it's 10:00 at night and I have school tomorrow. I can't review everything right now, but I ...

Thank you everyone! I've tried to edit it, but everytime I check to make sure it changed it hasn't. So I'll keep trying to edit it. Maybe it's just my ...

Helen- I loved this excerpt. The story idea was different and unique, but interesting at the same time. Thanx for explaining the story in the beginning, too. I'm going to ...

I liked this chapter. It was just a little weird, I mean Mr. Sheldon is just a little weird. Otherwise it was completely perfect, I couldn't find anything wrong with ...

Wow that was just.....the cutest thing. I like Vick I hope he turns out to be good for her. [quote]“No one will ever keep us apart.” Was this line supposed ...