In_the_Moonlight

I really liked this chapter but I wish that you'd give Rose a bit more personality. For example, when she's around Tristan I was hoping for a little connection, some ...

Thanks Buggy! :D Only now, I don't know what to say either....Where is everyone at. I think we should meet up.

Can someone post!!?? *coughcough-buggy-coughcough*

can i save a female spot please?? I'll post a profile tomorrow, if so! :)

This is the continuation of a short story I've been working on. Let me know what you think. I'm aware this is a little rough as of now. __________________ PART ...

Hey again! I really enjoyed this chapter it was well thought out. I repeat these moving words to Cody as I drag myself into out tiny kitchen. I think the ...

Thanks Ranger! I was originally going to have her like curse him from above or something but i settled for gasped because everything else i did was ammmmazingly cliched. :D

Marisol-SONIC SCREAM-Hunter "Under her control?" Marisol asked leading Jacob up the stairs."Do you think she's really controling you?" Jacob shrugged. "Beats me. As of now I feel....fine." he replied

This was really good. What happened to the guy who was following her though? After the guy with grey eyes bumps into her?

Marisol-SONIC SCREAM-Hunter They waited for the Hunter's reply. "Hunter, sir..." Marisol whispered when there was none. He looked distracted and when he spoke his eyes never left the girl"Hmmm?" Jacob

Thanks everyone! I appreciate the help :D!

Wow, this is really interesting. Unique. At first it bugged me a tad that the MC wasn't actually speaking, but when i allowed myself to really get into the whole ...

This is a short story I'm working on!! Enjoy :D ________________________ Click…Click…Click... Tempus, The Goddess of Time, sat perched on her favorite stone chair, clock in hand. Her fingers absen

Yes, finally another chapter!! It was great to continue along with Maria, but I'll admit, it was a heck of a lot confusing. I had a vague memory of what ...

Marisol-SONIC SCREAM-Hunter Something was weird about Jacob, Marisol knew that. But what? He turned to her and raised an eyebrow, "What?" "Hmmm? Oh, uh, nothing." She turned away blushing."You just ...