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Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Three
Hey there! okay first, i can see what your doing here, i mean you have the plot and everything. But i feel that your rushing into it, it's too fast. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
I totally loved it! it is a really amazing story!. But even thought it's a cliche story, you made it seem not cliche. There are some words that are kinda ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: raindrops at dawn
Wow! I absolutely love it!! and you know the sad part is? that it's true, there are some girls out there who are like that. i love the girl character! ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter
Hey!, first of all, i love your story! it was short, it was funny , and it was amazing! Your characters are great, and the plot was simply sweet (: ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
This is me second story! :D sorry if it's not that good, the idea just came to me! :D so please review it! Dear Scarlett, I’m so sorry, I know ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Devil: Chapter 2
Hey,first of all i loved your novel,even though i;m not a big fan of action novels,but i really liked this one! :D i really loved how much you put in ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
Hey, NOTSO ;) I'm going to review your story today :D okay first! i loved it i mean like really loved it! it was simple and understanding! :D but i ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Don't Cry Child
Hey,first of all,i really did like this poem,it almost made me cry. But some of the words are a little forced. But i loved the way you thought of this ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
Jas :D i think it is kinda cool ! :) i mean ,it's kinda different and it's something that a teenage-girl would feel if they're bestfriend date they're Ex. And ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey! :D okay,first,i totally love this story! it maybe a little cliche,but it's real. I love the part where ,Ethan see's that Lee is having a great time with another ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: If we only had more time...
You were just a little nobody in the school,you were there but it was like you were never there.Nobody knew who you were,you were like a ghost in the hallway ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Four
I am shocked! I really thought this would be like any other story,you know.Boy and girl like each other,one of them get hurts then recovers , then live happily ever ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Hiya! Im new here :)
Hiya guys! :D I'm kinda new here,hope to meet great writers here! or make new friends :) I've been here for 1 day and i love it already ! i ...
Sep 15, 2010