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:D I realy liked this was emotional...I liked the flow of it...You've got so much talent... :arrow:

:D I realy liked this story,it's interesting,but short, you definately have to write more. I like the coincidence thing, that was cute. :D

:D Thanks for the advice curiousvampire I'll think about how to make the start more interesting, and I'll definately proofread more....

:D :D No problem, I'm happy I helped you...I love Blood Tears and can't wait for the next chapter to come out...

In The Dark - Chapter 2 I was standing in front of the main doors of our house, searching for my keys. I couldn't find them anywhere. I looked even ...

:D :D Thanks for the advice, I'll try to improve this chapter and I'll surely continue to write more...oh and thanks for the critique everyone learns from their mistakes :elephant: ...

Oh...I love it...you put so much emotion in to it. Oh I want to read more. When is the next chapter coming out. I actualy nearly started to cry. Oh ...

:D :D I liked the second chapter....I love this story...the way he just kissed her in chapter 1 was pretty funny...This chapter was great as well...haha they have the same ...

'Oh' I love this story...I nearly cried with was sooo cute :D :D Are you going to write more??? Please let me know if you do... :arrow:

:D :D Oh I like 'Blood Tears' this chapter was so short...when are you going to write more? Please let me know.... :elephant: :elephant:

:D :D Oh he opened the doors for Ari a gentleman:) There's one thing shouldn't she kined of cry you know her mother just died, she's moving away...well I guess ...

:D :D Oh my god this was so sad, but Ari didn't sound that sad I mean wouldn't you damn go crazy if you saw your mother dying right in ...

:D :D I wanna know more...this is such a cool story...pretty sad that her mum had car crush but I love the way this story is going... thumbs up for ...

:D :D Wow...I just :elephant: :elephant: adore this story...I can't wait to read more!!!

:D Oh I liked it...I can't wait to read more!!! :D