Ikafe

Don't follow the light... Verse 1: I'm running through the forest, Crying, screaming after you, It seems like you can't hear me. Verse 2: I'm alive, But you don't belong ...

Thanks for the Advice Snoink, I'll try to work on my poem, to make it even better :P

Hey! This is my first poem. Please review it, I want to know what I should do if something's wrong with it to make it better.------------- I Rewrote it:)------------------- Thanks ...

:!: :!: This is a realy helpful article, Now I know what 'show, don't tell' means. And I'm totaly going to it in my stories. :wink: :arrow: Ikafe :arrow: :P

:idea: :idea: This is a brilliant piece of work. I just loved it from start to finish. You have so much talent:) Like a summer night that fades away It ...

:wink: This is realy good, but these lyrics doesn't look like their completed yet. I'll fly with you To the moon, or to the stars. And I'll take away The ...

:!: :wink: I Like this poem, I loved reading it. Thirteen is the big one, the last one of these my fears i can't out run &+ my lies start ...

:P :P To me this poem is totaly amazing. I love the Hate/Love idea :!: :!: :wink: Youre jokes that makes me smile This line has two little mistakes. It ...

:!: :!: :P I enjoyed reading this poem, I realy liked it. For me it flowed perfectly, One of my favourite here on YWS, I adore the ending I could ...

:D :D I realy like this poem. Truth sometimes hurts :!: :!: But overall this was a good piece. I'm trying to write my own poetry and make it unique, ...

:arrow: Wow, I love this poem, it's beautiful, I love dark twist in it, One of my favourites here on YSW :!: :!: :!: Could you PM me if you ...

Yeeey... Isha I realy like your poem, I love the way you have a hidden meaning, but I still can't figure it out, oh I love the way you ended ...

:D I liked this story, there where no big mistakes, I already hate Robyn she sounds pretty horrible. Oh that teacher is realy nice, at my school even if you ...

:arrow: :arrow: Hey.....this chapter is pretty short but I like it. I never thought that she would live with the boys, I mean share a room with them, I like ...

:elephant: Oh...I love this...she's going to be the only girl at her school, I would die if that like happened to me, this story is heading in a good direction. ...