Ikafe

Hey, I liked this story. I read the prologue as well I thought it was quite mysterious. You did have some mistakes but others pointed them out already, I suggest ...

:wink: Hey, I totaly love this chapter. I read the prologue and the first chapter part 1 aswell. I like the plot of the story, it's all realy interesting and ...

In The Dark - Chapter 4 Anzhela had an arrogant, smirk printed on her face. She was looking straight into my eyes, as if she was seeing something in them. ...

Hey! This chapter is brilliant. I saw few mistakes in the story, I'm not going to point them out so I just suggest you proofread. Overall I love this story. ...

This is a very interesting story. I totaly loved it. It's cute, funny, sweet. I like the way he gives her notes it's soooooo cute. I'm about to read the ...

Hey:) Before you read Whispers - Chapter 1 read the prologue-----> Whispers - Chapter 1 The flight from New York to London was really long and annoying, imagine sitting on ...

:arrow: This story is super. Ari has to go to a party full of boys, I would rather pretend that I was sick. It's going to be pretty hard for ...

Dark Whispers - Prologue I never thought that I was somehow special or different from the people around me. But just one day changed it all. The day of my ...

I like this story, it's realy interesting, it makes you want to read more:) I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. This story is brilliant :P Could you PM ...

Oh I love the way this story is going, I think Ari is going to have a hard life at her new school, now she has to share a room ...

In The Dark - Chapter 3 I was lying on the floor of my bedroom, still covering my face. I didn't get hit by a glass piece. It was awfully ...

:wink: Thanks guys for all your advice, I rewrote the poem, Please say what you think about it? I added some more lines. Ikafe :arrow: :P

This song is realy beautiful, I love it, it's nice you dedicated it to the orphans. I love your songs, keep it up:) :arrow: Ikafe :arrow: :P

Oh I love this story, I couldn't stop reading until the end!!! I'm on my way to read the next chapter!!! :D I haven't seen any mistakes, somebody pointed out ...

I realy liked this poem!!! And then I'd remember, Remember and wonder, how quickly this life, took away what was then, how I woke up, woke up a little each ...