Ikafe

Hey. This is Chapter 5 of my novel In The Dark. I already have all the other chapters posted. Chapter 5 is going to be quite confusing for you if ...

Link : Hey:)Be as rough as you want, nitpick, please just help me to improve my writing:) Ikafe :wink:

Hey:) I totaly loved the story. I felt like I was inside it, like I was the MC, I felt her fear and everything, I saw the whole story playing ...

In The Dark – Chapter 5 Anzhela, Bibiana and Derrel were still laughing, as if someone just told them, the best joke ever. I felt hurt. Lucas still wasn’t laughing, ...

Wow, I thought it was great, a bit too short (I would love to read more:) I don't think I saw any mistakes, but I'm not sure, sometimes they just ...

Oh my God...I love this story. It was Great. I like the whole plott. You had some spelling mistakes, but the passage is long and I can't find the anymore, ...

Hey, I looove Percy Jackson:):):):) My new story Whisper is a little bit based on it:) P.S: I'm also a fan of the superheroes, and super powers and stuff like ...

The Rebel Inside Me... No...no...no...no, I won't follow their rules anymore, I hate the mask they've created, To cover the real me. It's the society, it's all their fault, That ...

Hey, I read nearly all the books you stated and I love them:)

:)Hey, I'm Ikafe, and here is stuff about me:)Ask as many questions as you want, I'll be happy to answer:) 1. My real name is Viktória Kovalčíková. :wink: (try to ...

This was realy good. You have so much talent. Others above me already pointed out your small mistakes. I saw the whole story, infront of my eyes, I realy, realy ...

Whispers....Chapter 2 The inside of the school looked old but new as well. I mean the furniture the whole design was from the Victorian times. It all looked like an ...

Hey GothicButterfly. This chapter was brilliant. You had some small spelling mistakes like... The next morning I was rudely awoken by a blinding light shinning down on me and sounds ...

Hey:) I thought this chapter was great. I love that her mum let her keep the puppy(soooo sweet:) I love the whole plott of the story. It was funny that ...

Hey, I realy liked the story, it was good. I don't think I saw any big mistakes in the passage so Keep it up. Karen didn't seem bad to me, ...