Ikafe

This is very good. You didn't have many mistakes, the first person to review this allready said what they were, so I'm not going to do it again. I liked ...

Oh my god, for a rough draft this was really good. You had little spelling mistakes so I suggest that you proof read over this. Well this piece has a ...

I saw the whole story playing in front of my eyes while reading this, seriously this was brilliant and it makes me want to read more. I'm surely going to ...

It's really good a little bit too short but good. I liked the flow of it. There's nothing bad about it so Keep It Up :wink: (you have talent) Ikafe ...

This is really good. You had few spelling mistakes but I suggest that you re-read. I couldn't tear my eyes away the whole time I was reading because this story ...

Hey, This was really good, interestin, funny, really original, nothing that I read before. You had some mistakes so I suggest that you re-read it. But otherwives it was great. ...

Hey, So I haven't seen any spelling or grammar mistakes which is good. The whole story was spaced out nicely and I could easily read it. But the most important ...

Thanks guys, I agree with you about the reaction of Heather its not realistic, sorry I'll try to change it. Thanks for the reviews:)

Hey thanks for the review:) And no I didn't stop writting my vampire novel:)

I have to say that I realy liked it. I don't think you had any grammar mistakes, but just for sure read over your work. I too think that you ...

Hi Esther:) I started to write a new novel it's called Forever&Always could you review it for me please. Be as rough as you want. I only have the Prologue ...

Hey guys. Before reading chapter one you should read the prologue -----> Thanks...please review:) -------------------- Forever&Always #1 Tuesday 15th of September... Lia Me and Heather we're sitting i

I realy liked this. I don't think I saw any mistakes. I love this story. I totaly want to read more. I like the pictures at the end:) I love ...

Oh, I like this. I mean it's very intersting:) I can't to read more (love the idea for the story:)....It's realy interesting...

Hey. This story will be told by two people Lia and Gabriel. This is an unusual teenage pregnancy story. Hope you'll like, please review, I really want to improve my ...