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Re: Outsmarted - Prologue
This is a pretty good start to the story, if you ask me. It is rather short, and it could use some more descriptions in it. You could have explained ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Forever Forgotten - Prologue
First, I must say, both the title and the plot are quite intriguing. So many things can come from 'Forever Forgotten' and the short little summary provided. I would really ...
Aug 12, 2010
