IgnisandGlacialis

Hey! I liked it. Your use of descriptive language is amazing. Just a few things I'd like to point out, being a perfectionist and all that. Firstly, 'The calm sea's ...

:!: Do not read this if you have not read the first part of my story. It will make absolutely no sense. :pirate3: It is basically one scene, but quite ...

Hey - I love it! This is a very cute short story (: I do, however, think it might have done better as a poem. You do need to watch ...

Wow! This was a great poem, and absolutely true. When we are children, we do have more hopes than despairs, even though we do know more than adults take for ...

Hey! This is only your second attempt at poetry? Wow - your use of vocabulary is amazing. It was a really pretty little poem, and it brought a smile to ...

Hi! I love the spirit you put into this poem. You've injected a lot of emotion into it: that was great. I just found it a little hard to follow ...

A little poem I wrote for a limericks competition. It's actually only my first limerick, so maybe it's not as polished as it should be ... but still, I hope ...

Hey! I loved your use of adjectives in this poem. You knitted it together really well. Apart from the 'shined = shone' thing, I picked up one other grammar mistake. ...

This is a story I am working on at the moment, and I intend to finish it. It is a fantasy-adventure, although the first part - this part - is ...

Er ... this was very ... interesting. Yes, I agree with other reviewers on the point that it was more a rant than a poem, but I have to say, ...

Wow. You have written this incredibly well. The emotions you portray through a poem concerning a very traumatic experience are genuine and heart-wrenching. You give a sense of helplessness and ...