IgnisandGlacialis

Wow, that is really chilling. I very much enjoyed this. It was very well-written, and your spelling and grammar are both excellent. A very good prelude. It draws me in ...

Oh, and also, Snape does have a problem with the word 'Mudblood'. That's because Lily was one, and he loved her and once called her Mudblood and blahblahblah ... Yeah. ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just wanted to say, Harry Potter is my LIFE (see signature) and although I am generally indignant about fanfiction HP stories, this one made me laugh. I c

I LOVED IT!!! This is a really beautiful short story, really philosophical and matter-of-fact. I did not get bored: I wanted to read until the end. The theme behind it ...

Hey, I liked this! It was very good, and my preceding reviewers picked out the only mistakes I could find. Some of it was beyond me :P but still, well ...

This is amazing. It was also sad. You wrote this extremely well, and I think you have a lot of potential. There is nothing to criticise. Really. It was amazing. ...

Hi there, Elinor! I agree with WickedWonder: this was a very cute story, written in third person present tense, which, as WickedWonder pointed out, is a very hard 'tense' to ...

Well ... this was ... certainly intriguing. It is extremely unique and unlike anything I have ever read before. You are, without doubt, an awe-inspiring writer, and your descriptive vocabulary ...

And no, I don't know what happened to the spell check button, I've been looking for it myself ... (:

Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could review this for me ... an attempt at a limerick, only my first, so don't be too harsh on me (: Thanks! ...

Hi! I really liked it. The only thing I found a little confusing was that it seemed to rhyme at times, but then it sort of stopped. Apart from that, ...

Aww! I loved this poem. It is awesomely cute and light-hearted! I can also imagine this in a kids' book (: There isn't really anything to criticise, so I'm sorry ...

Wow ... that is really creepy. It's based on something your Aunt saw? That takes creepy to the summit. Anyway, I liked it. You've got talent. It was very interesting: ...

Hey, for a piece written in class, it's very good. I do like battle scenes (: they're exciting. However, it was rather rushed. You could try building on it ... ...

The beginning of part three in the novel I'm working on. (It stops abruptly because it is an incomplete chapter.) Again, if you read this without reading the first two ...