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Re: White Eyes (part three)
Hey, Apple - thanks a lot! Firstly, thank you very much for the compliments. I feel encouraged!!! And yes, I will try to do something about the 'Morgan glared' thing. ...
Sat Oct 09, 2010 8:42 pm -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
Okay. I feel small now ): but thanks. :pirate3: Am deleting this now until I find something about myself that's interesting enough to read.
Mon Oct 04, 2010 7:09 pm -
Re: What ho? A figure on the horizon?!
Why hello! I am a newbie too, so I believe we're stuck in the same boat, sailor. That's just about all I have to say. If ever you need help ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:14 am -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
Er ... there really isn't much interesting about me. I like chocolate :P and fantasy. I am a fan of The Lord of the Rings (both the book and the ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:08 am -
Re: Understudy
Hey, Azula! This was a really great piece of poetry. I can't really find anything to criticise, so you're doing very well. :P You just joined today, right? Welcome to ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 3:55 am -
Re: My Inner Child Ran Away :(
THAT IS SO CUTE ... and so true. )= sad face. I really love this poem, and I can't think of anything that could improve it. Now I feel really ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 3:49 am -
Re: White Eyes (part two)
This is the first section of the second chapter of the fantasy novel I am working on. It won't make much sense at all if you haven't read the first ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:00 am -
Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.
This was so sad!!! It contained so much emotion I was blown away. I can't criticise anything. I really enjoyed this piece of work: it wasn't boring, it drew me ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:49 am -
Re: Everything Will Be Fine. I Hope. chapter one
Hey, DemiGodsRule! This looks like it's going to be great. First off, there are quite a few grammar mistakes I'd like to point out. The number preceding 1 - '"MIKHAIL!!!!" ...
Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:30 am -
Re: Big Brother
Hey! Imaginemymind really nitpicked the only mistakes and improvable aspects I could find, so I have only compliments to offer. Well done! This was a really unique and touching poem, ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:25 am -
Re: The Wisdom of Mr Fox
Hey, I really liked this! It was unique, and I LOVE the ending. Ha ha :P. Really goes well with the title. I don't really have any criticism to make: ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:59 am -
Re: I Die
Hey, this was good! I have one small issue ... In the third verse, is the word 'wombded' supposed to be 'wounded'? Just asking :P P.S - Yes, I do ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:54 am -
Re: The Burning Light
IT'S AWESOME!!! I loved the imagery, the descriptive language and the emotion. There is absolutely nothing to criticise, and I suppose my only regret is that I can't do anything ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:48 am -
Re: Forgotten Homelands
I agree with you other reviewers!!! This was a fantastic piece of literature and I LOVED IT. Your use of vocabulary, knitted together to form flowing phrases that were amazingly ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:40 am -
Re: Death and His Apprentice
That was ... interesting. I liked it, but it was a bit confusing. Okay, the mistakes I found have all been pointed out, so I will spare you the pain ...
Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:23 am
