Ignatius5453

I like this poem's style, and your general writing style, good word choice, there were a few general things you could change, but the poem is still great without those. ...

At first I started to skim through this, but I decided to go back and really read it. Let me tell you, it sucked. It sucked at being bad. It ...

This was beautiful, heartfelt and full of palpable emotions, I could feel them jumping off the page at me. I feel your pain, in the past two years my school ...

It seems people have already given you the long reviews that point out what you've done extremely horribly wrong and/or extremely wonderfully right, so I'll just compliment you and say, ...

Just because it is a poem doesn't mean it doesn't have to have punctuation! Ellipses area all fine and dandy, but commas and periods are lovely. Oh and I liked ...

Well, I guess it is kind of formless and shapeless, and rhythm-less, and you probably can't even call it a poem, and there are a long litany of things wrong ...

Well, it was all over the place, and I can't decide if that's good or bad. Not a bad effort, not a masterpiece, but I wouldn't count it as a ...

Just because it's a poem, doesn't mean it doesn't need to have punctuation!!!!!! Oh, and the rhythm was a tiny bit... well a little more than a tiny bit off ...

What a cute poem, I was very tempted to go "awhhhhh" out loud. Very well done, the content, flow, wording, it was a genuine good poem. Congrats, I loved it. ...

This was beautiful, I know a lot of people that absolutely can't filter their words, and at times I',m included in that group, and this poem completely described those moments, ...

Well, I'm not going to throw out a long response like to one above because they pretty much covered everything. At this moment I'm listening to Mumford and Sons' - ...

Well, I can't really point out anything that hasn't been pointed out yet. But, well... maybe split the lines up into stanzas, it's good like this, but it was a ...

I loved it. I felt the emotion in all of the lines, and well... I dont know what else to say. It was good, but the lines were off-kilt, they ...

It was great, I agree with it 100%. Great job, I totally loved it. A few changes I would make: To write a tale with heart and soul, to find ...

Great poem, but when I was reading it some of the lines were uneven, and it messed the flow up a little, because some had more syllables than others and ...