Ignatius5453

It was absolutely brilliant! I agree with every line, it was so perfect. I can't even describe how good it was. To build off of the comment above me, I ...

This is one of those books that starts at some point in the future and then the narrator goes back and fills you in throughout the book until you get ...

I want to be a bird. Nothing would make me happier , Thant to fly away . than To open my wings and soar through the heavens, g liding on ...

I can't really tell, but I might have wiped a tear from my eye. This poem made sense, it was well worded, if a little 15th century Englandy (if that ...

It was deep, I'll say that much, you put meaning and emotion into it and tried to speak with a depth of knowledge and stuff that matters, but I didn't ...

I can relate to this poem perfectly, I deal with everything you seem to have mentioned, and other than this poem being legen.... wait for it.... dary, this poem had ...

You vocabulary was outstanding and overall your poem flowed very well. But I agree with someone below me, the title didn't really preface the poem well, the insecurity was shown ...

Ok, this is a very common theme in poetry it seems, the 'poor me' approach, everybody seems to do it once in a while, just because, well to be blunt: ...

The fact that its easy to read and not long make it brilliant to begin with, but the fact that its short makes it hard to put meaningful content into ...

Well, I only read the first one, and I liked it very much. You had great flow and wording, and everything matched up. Also you had proper grammar, punctuation, and ...

Well Sassykat fixed your punctuation, but you also need to fix capitalization, not every first letter in each line needs to be a capital letter, follow the punctuation. If the ...

I absolutely adored it. The thing from start to finish was good. But to offer one critique I would offer that you change the fact you have no punctuation, I ...

It was so well done. I don't have any criticisms to offer. It was brilliant as all hell. I mean I don't think there's any other word to describe it ...

Good punctuation and capitalization, and the whole poem was bloody brilliant. My favorite part was: I soar up, legs outstretched, wind whipping thorugh my body. I plummet down, legs tucked, ...

Let's start with a criticism: you don't need to capitalized the first word in every line, follow the punctuation. But otherwise, it was vivid and beautiful. I was entertained and ...