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When I read it, it didn't seem so exciting. And A. I can form coherent sentences, B. I am a fervent reader, and C. I appreciate good literature. You should ...

Not a fan, this seems so harsh and offensive to Christians and their beliefs, and just seems like such a melancholy view of the universe. I would hate to live ...

I completely feel you on this one, I was in first grade though and they sent us home. For the next week and a half I slept in my dad's ...

It was awesome, like honestly awesome. I have absolutely no complaints or comments to make on it, so all I can say is just to keep up the good work ...

Where were you when the planes hit? Could you see through all of the smoke and ash? Could you hear over the screams and yells? Could you stand through all ...

Where were you when the planes hit? Could you see through all of the smoke and ash? Could you hear over the screams and yells? Could you stand through all ...

You forgot to add that everybody has the right to live. And forgot to mention the 125,000 abortions performed each day. So add that to this list of wrongs you ...

OK to start out you did well, but when you threw the dialogue in there it threw me off and it didn't sound natural. Then when you got to the ...

well this would be perfect for getting into an alabama or a grambling state or maybe a U Cal, but if you want something Duke-esque or Stanford level you need ...

(It has kind of an oldish medi-eval feel, so please dont say change a word to this or that because it belongs and I made it so it sounds like ...

Good poem. It seemed a bit simple, but yet it had a deep meaning; if you get my drift. Also, your capitalization was abysmal. Every first letter in each line ...

Look outside the window. Can you see the pouring rain? Can you hear the thunder's echoes, outside of your window pane? Can you see the lightning strikes, as they flash ...

This is so indicative of human nature; isn't that how it always works out. The only way to keep a secret between 3 people, is if two of them are ...

Punctuation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Needs more, oh, and just because it's poetry doesn't mean every first letter needs to be capitalized; it follows the punctuation. But, otherwise, this was an awesome poem. N

God this was awful, I vomited halfway through.... NOT!!!!! It was epic, and when I say epic I mean legendary, well not really. It was cute, well written, and I ...