Ignatius5453

I read the original one, and possibly reviewed it, don't remember. But from what I remember it was good. Well, this one was even better. If you will let me ...

It was good, just in a few places the lines didn't seem to balance. you're lucky to live When the oceans have died. These two lines here don't really make ...

It was fresh and new, I haven't really seen much like it on here. You sure got your point across, I really felt the jitters and all of the emotions ...

My heart just melted. I want to hug you sooo much right now. This was touching, beautiful. I read every syllable of it, every word, didn't skim at all. It ...

"A fool says in his heart there is no God." -Psalm 14:3. I was always sketchy on this entire religion thing too. And my parents are HUUUUUGEEEEEE Christians, but what ...

I couldn't get what you were saying, it seemed topically you were jumping all over the place. And you mixed up "here" and "hear" and you pluralized "water" Keep Writing!

I once recall you saying, "Writing poems without rhyming is like playing tennis with the net down." You might have proved yourself wrong with this one. Very good job! Keep ...

I didn't get it... Well, the first stanza was good. Then... well, it kind of.... fell off of a cliff. Like the entire thing disintegrated. Maybe just keep the first ...

Haha! This was great! So lighthearted and, well... just epic. Good poem, I liked it.... a lot. I absolutely adore summer, but the heat does suck sometimes. The best line ...

Great job, I couldn't have written something like this any better than you have, I don't think anybody could have. I sincerely liked it. Good Job! Never, ever stop writing!

I am going to use my favorite phrase, possibly overused by me, but it soooo applies in this case. This poem was legen...... wait for it....... dary!!!!!! I feel the ...

Awhhhhhhh. After reading this I want to punch someone in the face. It was beautiful, I absolutely enjoyed it. Somethign you could fix: You sat next to me durring an ...

It was epic. Like legen..... wait for it...... dary! Every part of that was soooooo true. People say hate is a strong word, but so is love and everybody throws ...

Haha, it was great. Not at all serious, an extremely fun read, it had no purpose or meaning, other than to exist, perfect job on those haikus, I couldn't write ...

You had a very solid idea, and you put your message out there, but I feel you focused too much on the idea, and not enough on the rhythm or ...