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As if we thought it was anything but apple cider. (Silly Carmina)

I, too, found the chainsaw confusing. I liked the last two stanzas so much, I can't tell you which is my favorite... Lovely. One grammatical note: You seem to add ...

I like your creative simile, and how you kept it up. I found the spacing irksome, however. Generally, you seperate one line from a block of lines for emphasis. The ...

I like that you started each line with a subject that describes an aspect of yourself. However, the first two lines ended with a locational description (outside, behind), but the ...

A few people have pointed out that while love is wonderful, it is the relationships, loss, etc that actually hurt. I'm trying to decide if I agree with that. No, ...

When people say something about me, but don't say if it's good or bad, and so I assume the worst. "You cut your hair." Yikes! Using primary colors together anywhere ...

A crow blinked . Opals. Eyes snap shut in a white flash, Open. I am gone.

This feels very Jane-Austin. I imagine that it is going to belong in the romance section, assuming something in stirring between Emily and the hunk. You picked up the pace ...

Love is the most wonderful feeling in the world, but it leaves you vulnerable to the worst feelings. The trouble with love is that you can't quantify it, or even ...

Your title gave it away. I wasn't amused. It wasn't scandalous enough to be dramatic, and it was too predictable to be funny. (PS. By the time she was a ...

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loneliness

I was distracted from your strong images, effective literary devices, and clear dipiction by an impulse to poke my computer screen where I wanted to put periods. If you use ...

I liked this. I couldn't anticipate where it was going, but I felt guided along the way. Even with changes in time and place, your voice remains consistent. The canvas ...

Missive It wasn’t so long ago That I was living this history, Not writing it. Your hands made a lush country of my body, Boundaries drawn with my hot blush ...