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I was disappointed with this poem when I wrote it months ago. But reading it again tonight made me feel everything all over again. So, I supposed I expressed it ...

I really liked this- the feeling, the twist at the end, the tone. Boy have I been there. I want to caution you, though. Do you want this to make ...

Wow. I feel like you have three, very strong poems here. You have a powerful voice. I especially like the last stanza. I'd like to see each stylistic part expanded ...

I felt like you left it dangling, like there was more you wanted to say, but didn't. I guess the ending was abrupt in light of the longer opening.

You just contradicted yourself, Griffin. "Galatea wrote: If the demand for organics was higher, the prices would go down, and they would become the norm. " Griffin said: "That makes ...

I found this argument interesting: "I find it weird how you hate to eat meat, but youd allow farmers to use pesticide and other chemicals that eventually seep into the ...

One of the most irksome things I had to deal with as a vegetarian was the assumption people made that I thought I was making a difference. The other was ...

I must say that I am very disappointed in this thread Boni started us out with interesting sylogisms and her personal opinion. From there, we've disolved into logical fallicies and ...

Yeah... that'd weird me out. I much prefer anything spontaneous. I hate when people count on me reacting a certain way. I think the best advice I've heard so far ...

Hapy belated 17 b-day. I didn't know it'd past. Okay. Advice time. I'd advise against a party that put your guests in the position of needing to spend money. Custome ...

I know we're not supposed to preface our work, but I'm going to. The spacing in this is fairly important, and I can't make the site accept and keep the ...

I'm not surprised this won awards, etc. I sounds like the kind of thing that's read at a graduation. Yes, it could use some polishing.[code][/code]

Yeah... I've been that girl. I've also been in your shoes. She's not going to say "You know, I've changed my mind. I don't like you anymore"- which doesn't mean ...

Wow... I've seen so many of this kind of story, going to a Catholic school. You win. Yours made me cringe the most. Especially raping your mom with the knife. ...

You have many strong images and very memorable lines. My favorites include: ” Note to self: pens don't work upside down Note to self: Wash your hair tomorrow” “Too much ...