Idraax

I thought I'd take a break from my novel and post fragments of work that I wrote when I was in middle school. Looking back on them, I'm thinking, "I ...

Content moved to first post. Please read that one for the entire chapter. Thanks!

Ok, thanks. I guess I'll add the rest of the scene in now, instead of later. Thanks for the tip. I just didn't want it to seem to intimidating.

Wow, this is like a crash course on American Slang. I'm from the DC area so we, or at least me, say stuff like well "stuff", "come on"(used to express ...

Author's Note This story in a non-linear format, so if you're get confused that's ok. It's my first time writing in such a format, so I don't know how it ...

I go line by line and point out things I liked, things I found odd and things I had questions about in bold font. Then I put additional comments at ...

Writer's Digest! I saw the blurb, dropped the magazine and signed up right away. It's in the recent issue.

It's done. I hope it helped.

The words register for the thousandth time in a mind where they are eternally trapped. A place where they can't escape. They try to wretch free, but only succeed in ...

Your description of the underground city reminds me of the book The City of Ember . Does your city have a name? Pharmaceutical drugs? Can you give us a reason ...

Hello, Abby! You'll love it here! What kind of stuff do you like to read? If you have questions, ask in the questions threads, they'll help you out.

Yay, the next part is up! I love the description in the beginning. The dialogue between the brothers is great. It made me laugh. Why a dragon? Did Adrian think ...

I didn't read any of the reviews before mine, so sorry if it's repeating things that someone already said. Obviously this needs copious amounts of TLC. Please help. I need ...

Sure, I'll give it to you soon.

Could you review my first chapter, please. Only if you want to, if you don't that's fine.