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You put it under romance. I'm sorry, but it's one of the things I won't review. It's not one of my favorite genres, so I won't read anything that's focused ...

Yay! This means you like my reviews! I will get to yours as soon as I can. Which will probably be some time tomorrow. Sorry for the wait.

Author's Note This story in a non-linear format, so if you're get confused that's ok. It's my first time writing in such a format, so I don't know how it ...

spike71294 your review is done. I hope it helped.

Memory Of You By Lord SvaTantra I remember the days we were together, our beautiful bond was to last forever, or so we thought, but that was not to be. ...

napalmerski, your review is done. spike71294, I'm looking at your poem and will give you the rewiew soon.

All of my edits and comments are in the file. My general impressions are these. This is good. It read mostly well, but you have too many long sentences. Some ...

"So Rouge and Rapunzel had to explain the whole story" I don't think you need the had here. I love how air-headed Rapunzel seems to be.This is really good. Keep ...

I got into the habit of editing things since I'm in college and we have a ton of papers to write. It's a way to refine my skills and , ...

Oh, ok. I must have missed that part. I guess I shouldn't read and review an hour before class starts. The painting looks like something my Art Theory class would ...

First, what's a shambler? Can you describe it a bit more. All I get is that it's a machine, that has a propeller and three legs. What type of machine ...

I like it. Did you have a specific melody in mind? I like how you're using clothes as a metaphor for the self.

You're welcome!

I am in the process of editing it, but since it's a novella it will take some time. Sorry about that.

... There is absolutely nothing to say about this, but I still feel like I should say something. This flows really well and you have really strong cadences(If I'm reading ...