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Ok, because I tried to scatter bits of description throughout the chapters. my reviewers said I needed more though. They didn't really tell me how much.....:(

Seres snorted at her comment. He winced feeling a sharp twinge shoot through his soul. " You're still whole though," he said, staring at the bottles on the shelves, " ...

Seres turned to look at the girl, who walked in. She had large wings. Birds wings He turned back to the bar and absently laid out the coins in a ...

Skins!! Your review is done! I hope it helped. Thai you for the request! Any one else have any?

This was good. I think it's fine. Your narrator's voice was unique and your descriptions were enough. The only part which I'm confused about is did they move from the ...

How much description do you need? People said I didn't have enough and you're saying not to write too much. So, how much do you really need?

Yes! Yes! Yes! A review request! I will do it this evening, because I have class in half an hour. :( Thank you for the request!

I have two. I will take over the world! *shoots* I already did that. Die *shoots* You first

I think you placed this in the wrong category. You left it on a cliffhanger, which makes me think you are going to continue this. If you are, then this ...

Your name reminded me of a TV show. :)

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Banned for not being able to guess it! It's really easy. I'll take either answer.

A down to earth kind of person.

This seemed interesting, but very hard to read. Can you space out the dialogue, capitalize your I's, and put spaces between the punctuation marks? I did like your premise, but ...

Banned for having such a confusing avatar. :D