Idraax

Banned for building castles in the sky when you know they'll fall out of the sky.

Seres looked at him. "You can't get out like her?" he gestured to the sleeping wolf.

Banned for using that shade of pink. :)

toxicology

I did not see that. :) Thank you!

Banned for not googling DMV area and figuring out what it is.

Thank you very much! This helps. I edit the chapter based on the reviews people give me. You should have seen the first iteration of this chapter. Thank you for ...

Little Princess, your review is done! Anyone else have any requests?

Spread like a star, his hands are big I don't understand these two lines. How can hands be spread like a star? Thick and strong, a cord of muscle ripples ...

How do you make a signature? :?

Banned for making obscure references. :)

Banned for not making the reference obvious.

Banned for having an even more confusing location status. :)

You're welcome. I don't think this would work for a short story contest though:(. Short stories tend to have very definitive endings. You can tell that they story's ended. With ...

Ok! I also remember reading somewhere that said is something that most readers tend not to notice. I don't think I notice the word said if it's used. I know ...