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First, the purple text in the middle threw me off while I was reading it. Can you put that in a spoiler text so that your reviewers can look at ...

The format of this looks interesting. I tried singing it out-loud and it sounded choppy to me. Did you have a specific melody in mind when you wrote this? If ...

And the plot thickens! (I always wanted to say that.) Calypso opened her sticky eyelids and blinked in the harsh morning sunlight. She started to stretch, but she was something ...

Now, things are getting interesting....I love your description of the pool. I'm confused about this part though. She crinkled her nose. "And you are a mess." Aphrodite touched the coarse ...

I am intrigued. There was one part that confused me though. She remembered the day they brought her here. It was a warm day, with some clouds here and there. ...

I like it! I like the fact that you had actual punctuaution in your poem. Many people don't. (I myself didn't until Lumi pointed it out. :D) I don't have ...

What would it be if the Earth turned not? These lines were confusing. Do you mean to say that the Earth is not rotating? If nothing grows old then nothing ...

As an intro, this is quite good. I am intrigued and want to read more. I sat on the couch of my own living room, in the apartment suite I ...

lol Thanks

Um...link please? Sure, hopefully I'll get to it. I have to finish this French homework first...

Thank you! I will review it when review day begins.

If anyone has a better title for this, let me know please. You step out onto the tightrope. It's long and thin, vibrating under your feet alive. You take a ...

Since I couldn't screencap the whole thing. Various WYS'ers on what love is. [jasminebells] 1:06 pm: I has question [jasminebells] 1:06 pm: What is love? [The Lounge]: greatman has left ...

lol I will try. I still have to go finish translating my French homework. :D

I dislike oatmeal.