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Hey wonder! Your story seems interesting and makes me want to read more, but I got a little bogged down by your first sentence. My mother always said ‘No rest ...

I liked it. It's very tasteful. If I hadn't seen the tagline that said "For Japan" I wouldn't have know that you were talking about the earthquake. I like the ...

I liked it Arg. Aside from a few things, it's fine. You did leave out a word or a couple of words in this sentence. Opening the dresser next to ...

You have made me laugh. I couldn't get through the entire thing because the names got to be a bit much. I do like the fact that I could imagine ...

Ok, first I think something went wrong with your formatting. Unless you meant for It\'s been six months since it came to be like that? It looks odd and it ...

It's interesting so far. I think you should make a little note about what the time period is. Right now, I get the sense that it doesn't take place in ...

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Interesting. This makes me want to read more. Two things I would have liked to know though. What exactly is someone's chi? From what I understood, it seems to be ...

I love your first sentence. It was a really nice hook and it made me want to read more. I like your descriptions of what happened. One thing I would ...

This is interesting. I was a little confused, because the transitions between what happened in the past and what's happening in the present are not very clear. Perhaps you could ...

Nate help! New chat's being wonky! The censor won't work! The chat server said it disconnected on us and we all logged out. When we logged back in....well you can ...

Write the grocery storey epic about the great grocery store war of '11 Would the swiss cheese be neutral? Would the tomatoes fight against the potatoes? It's your story!

Alva I want to see how this will turn out, I thought. ''Interesting story.'' I said, leaping onto the cheerful, human's shoulder. ''I'm joining you.'' The grumpy human-Erin, I think ...

Like Sauron's eye, except you're spinning.

Alva I hissed and reared back as the loud human screamed. "Do you have to be so loud!" I yelled back. ''You're hurting my ears.'' The human stopped screaming. "Wait...you ...