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Re: Cuts.
One word(bcuz I'm lazy -as usual): BRILLIANT!!!!!!
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Efforts We Make
When attempting to climb the mountain towards your dream, you’ll encounter some rough, steep corners while enjoying some smoother and easier routes. Despite all the efforts we make to reach ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: How they are all moving on…
I smile at the flashbacks from the scenes of the YouTube videos. I laugh my heart out at them convincing my brain that that’s the only source of humor I ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Mordred
Hello Leah! Well, to begin with, I thought you're fantasy story made a nice work on drawing a pretty intellectual and touchy plot. I'm a big fan of the medieval ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: The Hole Of A Mind
Hello Lion! Now, to begin with, we all are here, with our raw, yet, to-be-stupendous writing skills. Our writings are at their 'baby' stages and need care, warmth but also ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: For You
We were crazy, We were young, Our life’s main aim was to have fun, But all that went away When fate came knocking one day Telling us, that our time ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: The spark
Hello Adriana, My overall impression on your 'narrative poem' was that I didn't find it all that 'narrative'. I didn't get the story behind it. It was just like an ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: A Love to Last Forever
Hello Saccharin, I'll tell you why I liked it so much -because it's short and it has a bigger meaning. I'm the kind of girl who likes poems like these ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: The End Is A New Beginning
A true story that changed my life. CRITICIZE!!! The glowing seatbelt light sent chills down my spine. The sharp sensation in my gut fluctuated as I clutched onto the uncomfortable ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Engulfed In Sin
Last night might not have been the holiest night, I’ve committed sins and I’m tired of repenting, Tired of crying and tired of resenting. The monstrous howls that wake me ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Rustle Of A Wing
I already gave you my review before we handed in our coursework. Just posting here for a point or two. I'm bored, basically so...y'know what I mean, right??? I lOve ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Purity Lost
This story came along as my fingers moved across the keyboard. I really didn't know what I was writing till I came to the last paragraph. It's really not my ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Music and memory
L-O-V-E-D this piece! Sorry to say though, it was just too long for my capasity. I read like not even half but I liked it! Next time, make it a ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: My thoughts on my children’s tales.
Uhh...Boo? I know ur titled as 'Novelist' so...why's this work of yours so DaIM sHoRt???? Maybe you need to edit this one BIG TIME!!! Later.....
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: College Life.
Hello CardDragon! This lyric you wrote speaks alot about, us, people who are about to move onto college and leave all memorable things behind. I have two questions though: When ...
Sep 5, 2011
